In writing, this year, I decided to do a program that included history in the process. We are learning about U.S. history, and have been researching Native Americans and the early explorers. On this particular week, the kids were challenged to write a poem about what the explorers felt when they came ashore after the long trip on the boat. To my surprise, Jacob really surpassed all expectations and made and incredible poem.
The American Explorers
Their hair flowed with the wind as they approached land,
Their eyes twinkled in great hopes of settlement,
Their mouths blabbered trying to fathom the excitement at hand,
And their arms flailed as they yelled in excitement.
They remembered the reason they came.
They hope the Indians are friendly.
They are the great English explorers.
-Jacob
Meagan chose to take on the view of the Native Americans and what they felt or thought.
Native Americans
Legs kneel down, descending as they peek suspiciously.
Their bodies trembling, and in tremor ever so fearfully.
Their eyes swiftly searching for signs of onslaught.
Their mouths utter a silent gasp.
They then grasp a weapon imperative for stability.
All they dreamed of was amity.
They are Native Americans, who wanted to be left in peace.
-Meagan
I thought they both did a fabulous job, and love seeing the progress they are making. I think we have some poets on our hands.
-Sarah
It certainly looks like you have poets in the making. Both did a great job!!!
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